It ends tonight

Hello darling.. i realy like this poem.. and i think ive commented it already but i really like it a lot again as im reading it so im commenting it.. but you should change the last staza

is this wrong
or is this right
tell me now or -->tell me or
it ends tonight

idk lol i think it would flow better :)

This poem is really good

Hey this had a lot of meaning and emotion behind it. very well written. thank u for all ur comments on my work. meant alot =] xx

I likes ALOT !!! =]P a whole lot!

Short punchy lines. works well if u read it fast =] i like a lot. keep writing

Keep Hope

Matt