Biggest fear, it true

by xxmichaelxx   Nov 5, 2006


My biggest fear is you
It may might seem stupid but it's true
Loosing you is a part of it
And do you think I ever wanted it?

I wished everyday to be with you forever
But all that does it is to make it never
Does it make sense to you?
Or does it looks like it's not true?

I'm such a sh1t to not let you know
That everyday I want to show
That I really love you to death
Do you even want to make a bet?

*needs improving, i know! lol*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    Thats exactly how I feel right now...I have to give you a 5. And I didn't see anything wrong with it.

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Yeah this one needs a little fine tuning lol but it's good. You know I always wanted to ask you if you were a boy or girl caue your pro said boy but your poems said girl. lol Anyway I don't care if you say your a boy lol it's all good. Anyways good poem so far I like it...I especially like the idea of it.
    =D
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    This one was good though... yes it does need some improving, especially that last line, it really didn't work... but nice job still

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