Wow, amazing write here, yes it was a bit short, but it was simple and to the point. The Flow was great. Good Job!!! |
This poem was really good. It was short but still good. I liked the concept. |
Loved how u didn't write a long poems. sometimes the best ones are short. like this one. love it. |
Its short, simple but very sweet... ur friend is lucky to have such a friend... i liked the flow, and the use of words showed the strong feelings of friendship with ur friend... loved it 5/5 |
by Michelle
I LOVE IT!!! It's perfect! 5/5! |
Thats so sweet, what a lovely pledge....i loved it 5/5 |