...I'm awe-struck...these newest four poems have been absolutely amazing. Especially this one. These last four are my four favorites by you, without a doubt. The once-twice theme really worked well in this poem.

Tripp

I like it, it's really good. The passion in it is stunning. I think that maybe there could be more of a rythm in it, it's great though.

:)keep up the good work
your friend...
alissa