What You Did To Me

by Raychel   Nov 5, 2006


The minute you said we shouldn't be,
You pointed a gun to my head.
The bullet was etched with your name,
Oh-so obviouly you wanted me dead.

You took a razor to my wrist,
And pulled it slowly across.
Is it fun to play with my heart?
With it you seem to like to toss.

You shoved those pills in my mouth,
Made me take an overdose.
You took away from me
What I once held so close.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    Wow, this is amazing, it's hard to say what I felt. I felt like it was me going though this, it's really great. I can't seem to find anything to say, the length was good and the rhyming and rhythm was awesome. Great job!!

    :)keep it up,
    your friend...
    alissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    ...you just keep improving. haha I wish I was as good a writer as you. you put so much meaning into such a small amount of words, it's great. what takes me 10 words takes you 5...great job :)

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