...you just keep improving. haha I wish I was as good a writer as you. you put so much meaning into such a small amount of words, it's great. what takes me 10 words takes you 5...great job :)

Wow, this is amazing, it's hard to say what I felt. I felt like it was me going though this, it's really great. I can't seem to find anything to say, the length was good and the rhyming and rhythm was awesome. Great job!!

:)keep it up,
your friend...
alissa