Comments : Play Dough

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    It is not often that one feels trapped inside what must otherwise be a lifelong bond of friendship. but when it does happen, then it is all too easy to see past the veil...

    very different from your usual pieces, but one that definitely carries your stamp of mastery.

    wonderfully written. do hope you are feeling okay.

    love and hugs
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by CiCi91

    Hey Sondos...nice poem..a bit sad though..but i like it...and keeps up the awesome work!

    ~*Carrie*~
    AKA
    ~*CiCi*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Yvonne

    This is a very good poem. I like it a lot. It hits me. Keep it up!

    -Yvonne

    Check out some of my poems if you want.