by Oceansoul Nov 5, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Walking through a field of roses |
I really loved it. I can definately see why it's not in nature. :) 5/5 |
Soo, you say no one understands? I can clearly see this is about sex, ehem, or maybe that is just what's on my mind. Either way it was a great poem, and whatever it means it says it so beautifully ^_^ |
by Stacey
Very well written poem. a few times the rhythm gets a little off, but only ever by one syllable. you did a great job with the imagery, overall, well done! |
by LadyPearl
Very beautiful refreshing job. Great descriptions! |
by Jessica
I like how this doesn't rhyme, but I can still feel what's going on. I like a rhythm to a poem, but the diction you used here was amazing. Awesome. |