A perfect rose

by Oceansoul   Nov 5, 2006


Walking through a field of roses
Shivering at every single touch
Wandering through honey sweet scents
Entering this ethereal field,
and witnessing this perfection
The sun embracing every rose,
with a gentle and tender smile,
as the wind softly gives a breeze

Dreaming away with the roses
In here heaven falls upon me,
in this field of thousand roses
Where every touch and every scent,
all the leaves and every breeze,
caresses my deepest feelings
here - in this place - so close to you,
only true perfection remains

the poem is in miscellaneous for a reason, it is by far not a poem about nature

all lines where roughly build around 8 syllables .

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  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I really loved it. I can definately see why it's not in nature. :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    Soo, you say no one understands? I can clearly see this is about sex, ehem, or maybe that is just what's on my mind. Either way it was a great poem, and whatever it means it says it so beautifully ^_^

    Sincerely,
    ~Richi

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacey

    Very well written poem. a few times the rhythm gets a little off, but only ever by one syllable. you did a great job with the imagery, overall, well done!
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very beautiful refreshing job. Great descriptions!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    I like how this doesn't rhyme, but I can still feel what's going on. I like a rhythm to a poem, but the diction you used here was amazing. Awesome.

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