Dude...you're not fat. I'm fat. I've had McDonalds four days in a freaking row. And I only played basketball once...now THAT is fat. Don't worry about how you look ;)

As for the poem, it was great. I think rhythm and rhyme are your strong points, followed by emotion. I'd say keep it up...but you already know to ;)

Wow, it has alot of emotion, makes the reader actually feel how you do. You shouldn't worry about your weight but I think that your poem was great.

:) keep it up,
your friend....
alissa

Umm if ur ugly that makes the guy at cedar point a complete sh!t face...hehehe...nice job. the last stanza coulda been stronger but good overall.
love ya lots,
sore

I like this poem but you are not fat. I have never seen you but I am 12 and 165lbs. I hate the way I look, I wish I could change 2 but I won't do anything extreme to get that way. Please don't you do anything extreme either. I hope you feel better some day but for the time being, think about the good things you have. I hope this helps. Great poem! Hang in there, luv SexyLesbian

I know how you feel sweetie! But, trust me, I doubt you're fat! Don't worry about how you look...I always thought I was fat but I have a loving boyfriend and that's all I need...Once you find love, it doesn't matter what anyone esle thinks about you! But, from now on.....forget about your weight!
xoxo