Love it

It was Beautiful Shaun... very unique XD I'm also srry....

This was a well written poem. Usually these kinds of poems are hard to flow, but yours flowed very nice. Good Job!!!

Peace, Joe

Bored of your original work? cheeky gits lol
This is a really good style, I havnt seen many like this =] Brilliant job you express your feeling very well in this format

This sooo different from all the poems i've
read....i rlly like it:)
this type of poem seems hard to write
so i guess this rlly shows you have talent...

p.s.
you're original work is not boring...
that's what actually makes it special....that it's original:]