That was interesting. When reading it I gave off the impression that it should be read to a fast beat. It gives it that creepy/scary factor, which is a good thing... if that's what you were going for.

Anyhow, I really enjoyed this.

A great poem with a deep meaning, i like your word choice, like always you have done a great job, 5/5

Great poem!! the title made me thing of the movie the corpse bride lol 5/5

I didn't like the ending, for you it was very cliche.
However, the rest of the poem was simply amazing...And nothing else. I loved it, as I love all your work. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

I imagined this poem a bit differently..but it was still very nice...the rhyme scheme is a bit random..but other than that its very creative and sad...it gives you the feeling of a girl in love getting her heart crushed in front of everyone..and she still waits for him to come back..its a very good idea and i liked it a lot:)

I think I know a great write when I read it This poem captured my attention and held me all through

The mystery on the poem makes
it a thought provoking piece.
Ive enjoyed reading this one.
5/5

Well, this was a really interesting poem. I've always wanted to write about a dead bride. It was really hard grasping the rhyme scheme of this poem, one minute it doesn't rhyme, then two lines rhyme, then all, then three of them. It was a bit wacky, but the flow still kept this poem strong.

Although the rhyme scheme throws the flow a bit this was still a good write. The picture of disappointment and bleak hope you paint is wonderful.
Good job.