My heart yerns for your touch,
It beats for your soul.
It hungers for your love,
You make me whole.

as close to perfect as any person can ever get...in my opinion perfect rythm, rhyme, and emotion. I know the feelings you have...oh trust me I know. It's a wonderful thing, and as long as you continue to show your devotion to this guy, he should feel the same.

This is a great poem, and so far my favorite of yours, and one of my favorites on this site