The End.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Nov 5, 2006


-The End.-

Along the shoreline she stands with bare feet,
Her eyes set on the waves crashing on the sand,
She presses her palm to her chest feeling her heart beat,
Walking forward as she tightly closes her hands.

She closes her eyes and takes a deep breath,
With silent tears streaming down her rosy cheeks,
She gasps for air and wishes for death,
As the water fills her lungs and shatters her shrieks.

© Jenna Elphick
November 5, 2006.

--I know that it's short but it's the first one that I've written for a while..--

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Wow great poem.. full of emotion and meaning.

  • 18 years ago

    by Thorn Lovely Dead And Lonely

    Beautiful And Storng, Very Well Felt

    5/5

    -Mia

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    It may be short, but the story behind it is so strong and heartfelt.. Very nicely written, the imagery was excellent and it flowed nicely too 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ It may be short, but it creates such a powerful story in those two short paragraphs. Well done +.+

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    ...closes her hands.

    She closes...
    ((I do not like how you use 'closes' so close to each other...But, that is just me.))

    I really, really loved this one. I honestly love everything you write, though. It is perfect the way it is; not all poems have to be long. This has a haunting tale to it and it was beautifully written, as always. Wonderful job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

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