This girl

by David b   Nov 5, 2006


I got this girl she's one of a kind, don't think of nothing else because she's always on my mind.
Everywhere we go people stop and stare, always looking over because were such a beautiful pair.
Don't think i have ever had a girl like you, hope we stay together and our love remains true.
I only met you 2 weeks ago and im already feeling like our love can grow.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Well, it's a good concept, but the way you have it typed up, it makes it really difficult. Most people, when they roll up into this poem, they're just gonna move on and not even read it. That may explain why you haven't been getting much feedback, if you haven't been. Otherwise, 4/5!
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