White Lies. [Haiku]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Nov 5, 2006


-White Lies.-

The little white lies,
Are killing what they once had -
Her shattered heart bleeds.

© Jenna Elphick
November 5, 2006.

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A haiku is a Japanese style poem consisting of three lines
with the syllable count 5, 7, 5.
A haiku is generally based on nature.

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-This one was done for a contest and that is why it is not based on nature.-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Sweety... its so simple and so amawzing... i love your work so much you dont even no ... :love:

  • 18 years ago

    by Oscar

    I liked this very much too. i was impressed that it wasn't about nature but it was still good.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I very much like it, as well. Do all Haiku's have to be based on nature? Or is that just how everyone does it.. Anyways, a wonderful write, as always, Jenna.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

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