Short, sweet and to the point, exellent poem! keep up the great work!
XOXOX
Kamille
P.s. come check out my new poem its called Pierced.

I really like!!!!lol nice poem!

I like this a lot - just to feel those things (even the bad) is all part of life's rich experience.
Take care,
Ben

This is straight to the point and to feel life's love is only how we feel pain.

Em