Ok I guess I lied...this is so much better than 'Till the End of Time'. it's such an intense and loving poem, and the repetition really gets me to thinking how you think. you have such a great ability, to be able to put so much meaning, into so few words...I love it. and I love this poem. definitely keep writing, your stuff is amazing

I love this poem.... its amazing how u use so few words to make such a strong feeling show. it's really great and i love it!