Great poem! The only thing i noticed was that you spelt "strong" wrong... Other than that, amazing!

xxEvilAngelxx

Besides a spelling/punctuation mistake, this poem was really awesome. I'm glad I read it- it had perfect flow. GREAT! 5/5

This is sad. It is really hard for me to comment on your poems because of the message at the top, it kind of interferes with my whole comment. But I really do think that this is very sad. Keep writing. But I must say that it is going to be very hard for you to get true comments and critique with the message you place above each one of your poems. I suggest you think about that.

Best wishes
Letty

I loved this, it was my favourite of yours so far.
The message behind the words was clear to see, and the whole poem was so powerful and moving.

This is my favourite poem of you by far! its very well written, has a nice rhyme ect! nicely done, oh, i set up a competition and was wondering if you would want to take part, i kinda see you in this one - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=71146 - if you decide to enter!

Narc xxx