Through The Fire

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Nov 5, 2006


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How can I say this?
I'll do my best....
This level of love
Is hard to express

if you werent here for me
I would be nothing
Certainly falling
Constantly running

You've got my back
For that I done you
This isn't perfect
But I wrote it for you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    The flow was good and I liked the concept, but I think that you could add a little more detail.

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is certainly spl and it could felt from every single word...

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Beautifully written!! I love the last line! It holds so much emotion and has great flow!

    xEvilAngelxx

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