This sounds professional...like it sounds like it could be published, and you could make money. an absolutely excellent poem. greaty imagery, rhythm, rhyme, and the made up words actually enhanced the entire thing...definitely put this on your featured list, and possibly send it into a magazine

Excellent!

Gee I cud careless if u liked my poem or not. I never said that I was talented. If u don't got any helpful hints dat could help me, I suggest u keep them to ya self. Cuz I cud careless really. iight hun I aint here 2 deal wit immiturity cuz I got no time.

Lata 1nzZ

Wow that was incredible deep emotions flowed behind the scenes of this 1.5/5 you rock!!

Cory