OMG .... uve expressed everything rele nicey

I like the rhyme scheme-not cliched at all.More important is the emotion and meaning of this piece.Very well done.Love the last stanza!

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

This poem is copied from a web sight. I had copied it too, but I took it off cause copying is wrong, I suggest you do the same or I will report you.
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