Comments : Why did u have to do this?

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    I like your style but in the middle it confuses me, I don't really understand. Maybe just clean up the middle section and it's good to go.

    :) great job!! keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by PeopleLeave

    Great poem. I love it but I wouldn't use names because that connectes me with it less. but keep up the good job, I like it