Reflection

by Blackthistle   Nov 6, 2006


Like a sheet of glass
All crystal clear
A single drop,
A single tear.
A fallen dream,
Of some lost fire.
A moment's pause
A dreaded beat,
The loneliness
Beneath the feet.
And then it falls
Never to rise,
Never to drip,
The last tide,
Before the rip.
A heart broken,
A young teens tears,
From missing him,
From some strange fears.
A night of burning desire
Wishing you were here,
Then to bed I retire,
The last nocturnal near.
I look across the darkened room.
The sheet like liquid reflects the fire
The burning catches further on,
Holding me within it's warmth.
I stare through to the mirror,
Hoping just to see myself
But when I look through my reflection,
I see someone else.

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I know there are some people waiting for more like this from me.. But this might been a one-shot deal. Just tell me if my others are as good and I'll remove this little footnote.

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  • 18 years ago

    by **dare~2~breathe**

    Oh wow.. i know you commented on "my Reflection" but this is so much better! i absolutely love it... it flows so seamlessly.. and the emotions are so strong throughout! i can even relate to what youre trying to say... needless to say u got me hooked.. ill b looking for more soon! xx keep it up! *5*

  • 18 years ago

    by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT

    Thats really good. keep it up!

    -xox-