by The Undoing Nov 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
If I tried to tell you how I felt, |
by Allison
I really liked it and I thought that it flowed well. The rhyming was good and in general, it was sweet. *5/5* |
by Syndey
Wow. That was simply beautiful. Made me smile. =] You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5 |
by Autuumnbree
Xcellent poem, Oh it's so sweet. I love how you smooth it all out, truly it made me tear up because it's so beautiful, xxcellent write..XP |
by The Undoing
Thanks man - Canada pride. |
Nice job bro you and I have similar writting styles thats why were the best lol keep it up man 5/5 |