Comments : If I tried...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Man i love this poem and it is just the words I would love to tell someone I love alot who chose to leave me for another who I still love alot this poem is so full of love and devotion and well written keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Aw:(.
    Thanks for the comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Nice job bro you and I have similar writting styles thats why were the best lol keep it up man 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Thanks man - Canada pride.
    Yeah you;re stuff is good.
    Thanks for the comment/rate.

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Xcellent poem, Oh it's so sweet. I love how you smooth it all out, truly it made me tear up because it's so beautiful, xxcellent write..XP

  • 17 years ago

    by Syndey

    Wow. That was simply beautiful. Made me smile. =] You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I really liked it and I thought that it flowed well. The rhyming was good and in general, it was sweet. *5/5*

    Alyson