I've never quite read something like this...but it was good.

"for then the pain would reside--
like my heart lost in the tide. "
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^^ I really loved those last two stanzas. Don't stop writing.

-Poetess

Ohmygosh, i was so moved by this, i loved the ending it was so beautifully written. The lines that stood out most to me however were "that sky I loved you under.... 13th shade of grey"
but then on reading it again i loved the whole thing, suddenly picking up on stuff that didnt click the first time. Brilliant! (PS. thanks for the comment on my poem, you have no idea how much it meant!!)