by The Lonely Rose Nov 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Visions in my head.. |
by Dominique
I think this poem is a really deep insight to have you feel its a greatt thing to be able to open up in your writings. Greatt work! |
This poem is great. |
Awsome. the beginning of the poem was very good. it was so interresting that it made me want to know wat happened at the end. i think the end was great. i can relate to this in a way... i think many people can relate to this. wonderfully written .5/5 keep up the good work. |
by Kaila
I liked this I found myself wondering what the picture was in the beginning but that's okay I thought the flow was a tad bit off but that's alright it's your piece not mine! |
by LiveLoveTy
Wow. this sounds totally corny.. but that had me almost in tears. you have a great way with words and rhyme. Very provocing and thought rising. This is amazing. Keep it up. :D |