You ending got me to poder my own 'ending' to. nice. wow that is a deep thing to think about.
this is awesome.
anna sophia

Its good keep it up

Oh wow. =) poignant and well written. though provoking. good rhyme, could be improved, tho overall good. =D

keep writing, u have talent,
xxx

Great poem. i loved it:)

I really like this poem. It starts out very sad and ends with strength but a little bit of worriedness.. if that's even a word. But you did a really good job putting your thoughts on paper.. 5/5 Keep it up!

Its a very powerful poem. I just had some problems with the flow of it.

It is good that u have moved on, but do not live in an ice prison feeling nothing, do not live indifferently to your life, that is not a solution to your pains, that is an escape, no prision is unbreakable, it will eventually crumble and u will have to face ur problem again, solve it, dont hide it

Gabby I'm amazed by ur talent... It's really a touching [oem, i like all of them. Remember, I'm always there for you, just pick up the phone and call me. You're so good, no wonder you have so many awards...

It starts out very sad and ends with strength i enjoy reading your poems and they work you put into them shows great job

I'm glad you moved on. You'll find out when it happens...you don't want to spoil a good book by knowing the end before you know how you got there! 5/5 ^_^

Wow. this sounds totally corny.. but that had me almost in tears. you have a great way with words and rhyme. Very provocing and thought rising. This is amazing. Keep it up. :D

I liked this I found myself wondering what the picture was in the beginning but that's okay I thought the flow was a tad bit off but that's alright it's your piece not mine!

Awsome. the beginning of the poem was very good. it was so interresting that it made me want to know wat happened at the end. i think the end was great. i can relate to this in a way... i think many people can relate to this. wonderfully written .5/5 keep up the good work.

This poem is great.
keep up the good work!!

~Chelsea

I think this poem is a really deep insight to have you feel its a greatt thing to be able to open up in your writings. Greatt work!