Comments : Tears

  • 17 years ago

    by Ney ney

    Wow sez... really really gud.. i love it....

  • 17 years ago

    by Ney ney

    Jus knw i always here 4 u sez... i love it... love you.. mwah

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Your rhythm's a little off because of the differences in syllables line to line, but overall i really did enjoy this poem. It was very understandable, very realistic, and very sad.
    Loved this stanza...
    They softly fall
    And pierce through my heart
    They glisten beautifully
    But rip me apart

    Enjoyed!
    Charisma*