by Ney ney
Wow sez... really really gud.. i love it.... |
by Ney ney
Jus knw i always here 4 u sez... i love it... love you.. mwah |
by *Charisma*
Your rhythm's a little off because of the differences in syllables line to line, but overall i really did enjoy this poem. It was very understandable, very realistic, and very sad. |