I met my dad a year ago in october... last week he looked me in the eyes and pretended he didn't know me. His phone was disconnected, and he had been sick lately... I just wanted to know that he was ok. He waws running from his apartment but he was too late. ...all I wanted was to know him.

I liked the flow of this it sounded swell.

A sad song with so much meaning i enjoyed it 5/5 again

I really liked that and I would love to hear it with music as well. I felt you described everything very well. 5/5 and thanks for commenting on my poem.