by Bridgette
Wow.. I actually really really liked this. The anger that you displayed could be felt just through reading this. You definitely let it all out, which is really good. Amazing write! 5/5 |
by Bryan
Ok, this is pretty good, not my favorite but it is a 5/5!!! great flow, keep it up!!! |
by Dacey Flame
Wow. Very extreme emotion. Extremely expressive. Expressively written. lol. I'll stop. But its better then my angery poems comes out. The rhymes make sense =P Real good for a spontaneus emotion poem. =) |