by Ice Princess
I feel really sad now :-( |
This poem is very good and very sentimantal very well written! Keep it up! |
by Lindsay
Very much like your other one, but still good. I would section it differently if I were you, it looks a bit clumpy. |
by ALEX
"So I whisper some memories from back in the day" |
This... This is just very very emotionally gripping. Wow! I was hooked right from the start, and you've got a topic that is very hard to cover in a convincing way unless you KNOW and FEEL what you're writing about. |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. With a nice floe to it.5/5 |
by ellewen
"I felt my true love start drifting away |