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by Ashley   Nov 6, 2006


So many tragedies in her life
It would be over if she had a knife
People dying, babies crying
Wishes she could stop the fighting
Sliver blade piercing her skin
A long line of blood flowing within
A girl unseen by a father so mean
A thin line of crimson,a cut so clean
No one is home, shes all alone
Still as a stone shes freezing cold
She writes a note, her last goodbye
Finally ends the pain inside
The only solution is suicide
Or so it seems, no one cares
She needs to talk but noones there
She pulls back her hair
And takes out a knife
Finally ready to end her life
She opens a bottle filled with pills
Just in case the knife doenst kill
So there she lays quiet and still
A lonely heart filled with guilt
All she needed was a little love
But now shes free, Free as a dove
Living in the sky above

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was really good and you portrayed a very sad feeling. The format was unique and different.. (: Very good jobbb. 5/5..

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    ""All she needed was a little love
    But now shes free, Free as a dove
    Living in the sky above"" i liked that part, it really just touched home 5/5

  • This is really good but sad good job...show alot of emotion...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    This is well written and very sad!! 5 outta 5.
    keep up the good writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Wow, dude, very amazing, write somemore poetry, i would love to read more, 5/5 from me girl, keep it up, you have an amazing talent....I LOVED IT!!! it was amazing and yeah....it was deep and it was gooood, 5/5

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