Omg.. i really loved your poem... splendid choice of words.. loved itt!! its short but it has a meaning to it.. that was such a wonderful piece of poetry.. keep up the great work.. ow and im the first to comment of this onee!! OHH JOOYY!! okay i really loved your poem (as i said earlier) so i'll goo check out some more of your poems right now!!
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]