Wow that was so amazing! your really good keep it up

Omg that is such a sad poem, i really like it, and i love the last line, that is really sad. if you need to talk then i am here.

sara

Thank you for commenting on my poem I really appreciated it. This poem is really good, I read a few of the others you wrote and alot of them are about your dad, they are very sad but you put the words together very well. My daughter is only seven her dad and I have been broken up for two months but she has all this anger towards him since he left and it hurts me and my children are just trying to get past things day at a time. Again though great poem!