I'm really sorry... i know how much it hurts to lose somebody you hold very dear to you seeing as someone i loved very much died just this summer. im really sorry and this poem was great...really just amazing. i loved the flow and rythm...everything about it was beautiful. keep writing youre great and could u comment my new poem? i only have one up on this website but ill add more later |
by erin
It almost made me cry... i know what its like to lose some one close.you can like feel your passion coming off your work. i probably could never write this. your a great writer! |
Wow amazing thats all i have to say...this was just a wonderful poem...i Know what its exactly like to lose some1 u care so much>>33 |
by aisyned
Idont kno wat is like to lose sum1 yet... but i did lose my dog who i had since it was born cuz its mom was my dog too but um i cried and it hurts really bad and everynite i say its my fault and see his face... i cry too sumtimes.. but one day we will meet them again... at heavens gateway |
That is so sad well written |
by broken apart
I love it!!! it has so much emotion i think u did a great job!!!! |
by JR13
Man i like this poem. i can relate to it with the death of my mom and my dad. its aight though keep yo head up |
Wow...This is an amazing poem. Thanks for leaving me a comment on mine, we can deff relateand im so sorry about your aunt...rest in piece both of our aunts =[ |
by Laurenf7
Its great x |
by Laurenf7
I love this poem. i have recently lost my granda over a month now and find this poem very comforting x |