Alone then dead.

by Sadie bishop   Nov 6, 2006


She's so young and beautiful
but doesn't realize it.
her pain so deep and bearing
she cant stand it
just wanting someone to care
some one to be there
but nobody cared or was there
she just sat there and stared as all
her soft wet tears stained her face
she was scared
and ready to disappear
from all this hurt and lies shes living
she was frightened and ready to die
she slit her throat, fast and steady watching her blood hit the ground slow and shedding.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andi

    This is a fascinating piece. it captures your emotions and all though its short it is just as touching as a long sad poem can be. its sad and so full of sorrow. but mot wonderfully written. def keep up the good work. id appreciate it if u could comment on my poems.
    andi

  • 18 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Omg this poem is really sad and deep, touching and strong, i love it. its really well written