I don't think it sucks. It expresses how you feel, that's all taht matters.

This is so good!! keep it up!!

Wow, this is very emotionally written. The flow and the structure was very well. Great job.

Peace, Joe

You write the way some people do not, you write from your heart, and like thisemosoldherhearttostarbucks, you express how you feel, you have a talent that some people don't. :)

Tony :D love ya
if you have time plz comment of some of my poems, like yours, I don't think my are any good either :D

I really like this poem alot!!!!
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i no this a random but
hun i read you about me and i no how you feel i went out with a boy for 3 months and when we broke up i cryed for like 3months and then i got over it he is only a boy and you can do so much better then that if you ever want to talk about any thing you can e-mail me xoxo_badgurlxoxo1405@yahoo.com and i will get back to you!!!! take care and reamber you don't need him if he don't want you then he is the one that is missing out

love always linda stay stronge it will be right in the end

This does not suck! you are so great at expressing 'real' emotions & painting a picture through your poetry. its a gift & you should be proud.

Ally. x

This whole poem was absolutely amazing. The flow, and the word choice were good. But the concept, was so astonishingly brilliant. I've never read a poem that got to me as much as this one did. Very great write. I'm very impressed. 5/5 and it's more than deserving!

Okay... this is so far from being a "sucky" poem. i loved it. the flow was wonderful. this is so good.
.5/5.

great job&&keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
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