Truth{Cinquain}

by disturbed one   Nov 6, 2006


Truth,
Sophisticated, Delicate,
Blue Eyed Deceit,
Rare, Blush, and Hurt,
Lies

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Cinquain- a type of poetry in which the first line has one word, the second has two words describing the first line, the third line shows
action with three words, the fourth line has four words that convey
feeling, and the fifth line refers to line one.

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This is my first attempt at a cinquain since grade 7(im in grade 11 now)...but im not sure if i did the cinquain assignment...so this may be my first ever :P

cya

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Wow...a.d.dmuch?

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Blush is a type of make-up haha. That made me laugh and I dono why.

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ya i realized that after i submitted it lol...and umm if anyone is wondering y i put the word blush...i have no clue but the only thing i can think of is...blush is a type of makeup or whatever...so basically...trying to hide the truth through beauty? i dunno thats the only thing i came up with lol

    pretty sad when u dont even know what ur own poems mean hahahaha

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    The only thing that threw me off was that you had the first line as truth and the last line as lies- aren't they supposed to relate?... unless they already do in a way I don't see... Other than that, I really enjoyed this poem. Keep up the great work!

    xxEvilAngelxx

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