by Dana Nov 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Just for a moment, I want to be yours. |
DANA IT WAS SO GOOD!! I LOVE YOU!!! lol!! |
by The Undoing
This was really well written. Lots of love put into this, very well done. |
This is a nice poem, but the flow just wasnt there...so it stopped me from feeling the poem for what it was, i think if you fix a bit of the cliche rhymes and add a bit of a stronger end, it will be an even more amazing poem...:) |