Not bad. Loved the title. The poem was done quite well, and especially liked these lines:

A sudden wind blow's
in from the north unshoved.
Bright stars begin to shine,
luminating high above.
As a man cries into the
wisdom of love.

Keep it up.
Jeannie

This is cool-it shows where each man's destiny leads him, and that wisdom is not always bliss.It says a lot more upon each reading.

Gary Jurechka