Would It Be Okay?

by SOinLOVEwithYOU   Nov 6, 2006


Would it be okay
To tell you how i feel
I just want one chance to say
I think this is real.

You make me smile
When I see your face
And the look in your eyes
Is one that no one can replace.

You make me laugh
With each word that you say
Just hearing your voice
Brightens up my day.

You make me cry
With each sweet thing you do
Would it be okay
To say i love you?

[C]copyright.2006.adria

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  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Hihi =D good poem! It reads very wel and I like what you're saying in it! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

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  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow.That is a very good poem.Umm...Well could u give me some advice on how to write like that.My e-mail is ipod_gurl123@yahoo.com.Message me or comment another one of my poems.Please.

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