by LockedInEternity Nov 6, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
They speak in tongue, |
by Melpomene
I liked how you tried a different format of poetry it was really good and shows talent. A scary image was painted within this pieces I truely liked it. Gave me this chills seeing as i'm sittin in the dark in my bedroom and the branches are brushing against my windows.... I shall have to read a love poem next I guess. Well done none the less on creating this. ~mel |
I didnt get what you were trying to say about the rhyming format but i loved the poem anyway! well done hun. |
by Kalee
This is a good poem. all of the ryming is really good. it is true that we dont listen to what people say even when they are alive. |
Love ur poem! the style u used and everything. 5/5 |
by shawn
Great work, i liked the style you used. 5/5 |