I didn't quite understand what you ment by the stanza format thingy, but overall it's a very..deep well written poem. Thanks for the comment!
4/5

Wow, this is very emotionally written. The flow and the structure was very well. Glad to see you trying new styles. Great job.

Peace, Joe

Wow,
this is wonderful............
you have done a great job once again.....
5/5 from me......

The new fromat was differnt but very effective, i like it... i loved the poem, i love all 0f ur poems ive read so far... keep it up

5/5. Good poem. It was kind of hard to follow through. But still a good poem.

It's always good to challenge yourself with a new style and I think this really works.
I found the theme interesting and the imagery nicely vivid.

Oo. I liked this one too. Lol. It was original again, and very interesting. It left me wanting to read more.

I liked the imagery you managed to use in this. I could really picture what it looked like and how you were describing it. The flow was a littl rocky with some of the lines, but the wonderful stanzas made up for it. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I really like this.. It was really dark and scary. And I think that the rhyme scheme worked very well in this. The flow and rhtyhm was very good and held up well. You described everything very well in this also. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

Interesting format. Very original. It's good to see you can come up with your own styles. This was a very unique subject to write about. I really enjoyed it. =]

A rather scary and haunting poem there. I liked how you made sure to explain the meaning of abacdd etc, it may well be too technical for many people on this site lol. Yeah, I think it worked, I didn't seem to find any fault in the flow or rhythm. What I will say though, is watch your rhymes as in places they seemed predictable (such as by and cry). I liked your use of language, especially at the beginning of the poem. It certainly freaked me out thinking there are dead people trying to contact me, and when I die I'll have to wander lonely and unheard.
Thanks for sharing.

I thought that this poem was wonderful! the rhyme scheme was new, but refreshing. great job! 5/5

Great work, i liked the style you used. 5/5

Love ur poem! the style u used and everything. 5/5

This is a good poem. all of the ryming is really good. it is true that we dont listen to what people say even when they are alive.
Great poem btw.

Kalee

I didnt get what you were trying to say about the rhyming format but i loved the poem anyway! well done hun.
much love and many kisses,
bex

I liked how you tried a different format of poetry it was really good and shows talent. A scary image was painted within this pieces I truely liked it. Gave me this chills seeing as i'm sittin in the dark in my bedroom and the branches are brushing against my windows.... I shall have to read a love poem next I guess. Well done none the less on creating this. ~mel