If you were...

by Italian Stallion   Nov 6, 2006


If you were in my eyes for one day
My smile would be huge
I'd see your beauty from deep within
And that I'd never want to lose

If you were in my heart for one day
It would beat that much faster
Just knowing you're in my presence
Knowing we connected from deep within

If you were in my arms for one day
With your warmth up against me
And the smell of your sweet hair
I'd never want to let go

If you were in my soul for one day
I'd feel complete
Like I've been striving for
And in my heart I'd know you are the one

If you were in my eyes, heart, arms, and soul
Then I'd know you were in my life forever
Holding me close and kissing each other
Moments after we said, "I Do"

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem is so romentic. and full of love feelings. it shows that how much a person can love to other person in world... the deep feelings

    only that person can write this poem who realy understand the true meaning of love. and you wrote it so nicely. i am sure you realy understand what is love feelings. i love the repitition yo have used in this poem that makes the good image of true love. and its realy to the point poem according to the your subject.
    welldone

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Personally, I think it's pretty much a perfect poem. I went through the whole poem thinking about editing, because it didn't feel like it had any need for anything. I think it is something you'd get published, and I think it was very well written. I love the concept you have here, for one day, and the concept of if. It is hard to comprehend this as a sad love poem, but that's just what it is. I understand that you wish this all could happen. At the end I felt all happy, thinking that's what happened, you got married, but then I remembered the if's that changed it all.

    Wonderful poems.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Aww this poem is so sweet. is shows so much caring ang love. its jus full of emotions. i can rlly feel the emotions in the words. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Wow brilliant
    i wish i could write like you
    keep writing
    you write with such beauty
    =) 5/5 =)

  • 17 years ago

    by browneyezz

    That was amazing, great job

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