by LockedInEternity Nov 6, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Provoking thoughts gleam in her eye. |
by Blissful
LOVED the ending! What a twist! Wasnt expecting it which is why it left me wanting more! Amazing poem you have here. Really captivated me from the beginning to the end. Your rhyming flowed so naturally without anything seeming out of place or forced. The imagery you painted with your chilling word usage blew me away. I loved each and every moment of it. |
I've always thought it was far to easy for attractive women to seduce men and get them to do whatever they want, but it's true some men have that ability too and it becomes far more dangerous when they do. Excellent job 5/5 GG23 |
by Melpomene
The way you write poetry, is alot like how I use to write and I do enjoy it alot. Expecially this poem. Something about it was chilling and at the same time intense I honestly got hooked from the first line until the last. Interesting and also seemed quite cute to me in its own way also like a fairytale. Well done. ~mel |
by Startle Me
Wow. |
Omg i love this poem! it totally rocks, u got serious talent.. 10/10 totally awesome.. keep writin.. |