Very nice poem. Lol, still I didn't not get where you were going, but it flowed very well. Great write! 5/5 |
by Cooper
Her story has eight legs to it, |
Awesome poem!!!! like all ur others!!! keep up the great work! |
by Elynnka
Awesome poem! I like how you described things and the ending was not as I expected, but I really liked the idea! Good work - original, might I add. |
by Allison
Hey! That was one of the best poems that I have read. I love the swist at the end and the rhyme scheme is awsome. Keep up the good work, and you can check out some of mine if you want. |
by Goran Rahim
This poem is so great |
Wow, great poem...loved the twist and every other word of it, the flow and rhythm was amazing. very well written. |
5/5! AMAZING! I loved the ending! It was so great. Your an amazing poetress! |
by ashley rose
Different but goood |
Ooh that had such a lovely twist. I loved the descriptive imagery designed to draw the reader in and the ending was a nice surprise. |
Ooo. I liked this ^_^ It was so original. It like, swept me off my feet lol. I didn't see it coming. |
by Stephanie
Wow. This is one of the best poems that I have EVER read. It was perfect! The flow, imagery, vocabulary, just everything was perfect! :) Loved it! |
by Darien
Very nice poem. You really incorporated the black widow spider with this girl. The traits of each are similar and you pointed it out that well. Very detailed and very creative. Good work. |
by Bridgette
Wow.. I loved this poem. It was very imaginative and you described everything very well. I loved the little twist at the ending. That one really made the poem even more amazing. My favorite stanza was: |
by Mark
Haha this was pretty good! I loved it. |
by Jackie Marie
Wow...You are a very talented writer. You did an excellent job. I don't see anything that you could possible change, except, maybe make the last line a word longer or something. That might make it sound a little better. |
by Brittany C
Wonderful poem. Keep up the good work. I loved it.5/5 |
Wow, nice twist there. |
by Jenni Marie
I LOVED this. |
by locky
Awesome poem i would rate it but i don't know a high enough rateing really liked |