This was a very nice poem..i liked the first stanza the best
"Does it matter to you that I cry;
Do you care I'm even around?
I'll fall forever from the sky;
I'll just fall flat to the ground."...it popped out at me. I thought the stanza with the word hot in it was a bit forced and could be done better. well thats all that i have to say..very well done.

Wow. Lots of anger again lol. I liked the way you expressed your anger though. It wasn't through profanity, and you used great imagery. When I'm angry, I usually use a lot of profanity. I think I only actually posted like 2 poems that involved swearing in them to this site. xD

Anyways, the flow was stable, the imagery was used well. I didn't see any need for fixes. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha