Last Day Alone

by Wings Of Flames   Nov 6, 2006


I shall never see the light,
But you'll only be in time,
I wait for them to dance,
In the richness so sublime,

Last day to take me,
The finale before the dawn,
I shall cry this ocean,
And I wait to be reborn,

I will miss the sweet laughter,
With each breath I only take,
Enough to see your faces,
And each tear you surely fake,

In this bleak awareness,
My mind has fallen dark,
You are blind with this vision,
That my sanity shall embark,

Goodbye now forever,
I have no soul to breathe,
I no longer know of you're sweet words,
So I have nothing to believe.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Umm.... amazing? wonderful? fabulous? whatever I say it doesn't even begin to describe this poem. 5/5.

    ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Lee

    Loves this one also! :3

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, very well written, the flow and the Rhyme scheme was great. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    I rarely read friendship poems here, but this one surely proves me wrong,
    it very good in almost every way,
    "I shall cry this ocean,
    And I wait to be reborn," is very well found, the third stanza seems to be so hard or even sad ,
    the forth stanza really is very very good in choice of words, rhyme and rhytm
    perhaps the sentence "I no longer know of you're sweet words" is a little bit to long for a good flow
    but really,a very very good piece of poetry
    keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw. That was beautiful/sad. I know how you feel. Check out my poem Thank you for the lies. 5/5!

    Taylor♥

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