I voted you a five for your poem, because i thought it was amazing, it all rhymed perfectly, and it was realy emotional.
i think its good that it was quite short, as some people that write long poems kind of lose the point they began with xx its really pretty x well done xx

Its good i like it 5/5 = )

Hey i can some what relate to this poem. i no wht its like to miss someone. anyway great job expressing urself and great use of words. thank u for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx